Miss Snark's First Victim
Dr. Suess did this and made it rhyme.
Very reminiscent of "There's a Wocket in my Pocket."
There’s a Gratchitt in my closet and a Gnarlyss in my drawer.I know I saw a Snoggitibog behind the bathroom door.I'm confused. What are you trying to say? Too many unfamiliar words/creatures all at once. Sorry. Maybe this isn't just my kind of fiction.
Too much like "There's a Wocket in my Pocket" for my taste.
Reminds me very much of Lewis’ Jabberwocky poem, which I love! I would definitely read more to see what you’ve done in this endeavor.
Hehe, I like it. Just_me, it does rhyme! :P(*is friends with Just_me, not being mean*)
I love wierd words, so I loved it.
First line was good with the rhythm and fun words, but I stopped when I had a hard time pronouncing Snoggitibog.
Love it. Got hung up on Snoggitibog, which I think should be Snoggitybog to make it easier. Hmm, I've never heard of or read Wocket in my Pocket.
It made me think of "there's a poem in my pocket and a picture in my head" but I would read on, I liked the clever names.
Dr. Suess did this and made it rhyme.
ReplyDeleteVery reminiscent of "There's a Wocket in my Pocket."
ReplyDeleteThere’s a Gratchitt in my closet and a Gnarlyss in my drawer.
ReplyDeleteI know I saw a Snoggitibog behind the bathroom door.
I'm confused. What are you trying to say? Too many unfamiliar words/creatures all at once. Sorry. Maybe this isn't just my kind of fiction.
Too much like "There's a Wocket in my Pocket" for my taste.
ReplyDeleteReminds me very much of Lewis’ Jabberwocky poem, which I love! I would definitely read more to see what you’ve done in this endeavor.
ReplyDeleteHehe, I like it. Just_me, it does rhyme! :P
ReplyDelete(*is friends with Just_me, not being mean*)
I love wierd words, so I loved it.
ReplyDeleteFirst line was good with the rhythm and fun words, but I stopped when I had a hard time pronouncing Snoggitibog.
ReplyDeleteLove it. Got hung up on Snoggitibog, which I think should be Snoggitybog to make it easier.
ReplyDeleteHmm, I've never heard of or read Wocket in my Pocket.
It made me think of "there's a poem in my pocket and a picture in my head" but I would read on, I liked the clever names.
ReplyDelete